[quote=@Nosuchthing]
I edited the power a bit :). Let me know your thoughts.

Also, anyone want to work on some pre-established relationships :)?
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The one thing I'd like to point out about her character are the potential psychological effects that should be occurring as times goes on. Since the issue is still fairly fresh it's passable that she hasn't suffered from anything yet- but as timeskips occur and as she settles into her new life as a disabled citizen I'd personally like to see that disaster be played with respect in her character. Allen and I were talking and we have no problem with her being in such a calamity- so long as that affects her.

Being shot several times is kinda really bad, but knowing her friends were shot and killed (even if she did or didn't see it, since it's not really stated if she witnessed their deaths or not) should be playing some role in her person. Post Traumatic Stress Disorder (cant stop remembering the night in her dreams), depression (It's my fault they died, I came up with the plan to go to the fair that night. It's my fault it's my fault it's my fault...), general trust issues with people (what if they pull a gun on me? Do I want to run the risk of losing them?), and crowd discomfort (Because she was in a crowded place during the shooting).

A real person would probably have ALL of these things. I'm not a GM, so my word isn't law, but I'd really like to see her character's issues be played with more respect as time goes on- because while it might not be eating her now (two weeks after) it SHOULD be at the one month mark.

Just some food for thought.



[quote=@BurningDaisies]
This needs to be an internationally televised--dare I say "Olympic"--sport!
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Have you smoked your daily dose of green tea and embraced your life as a cactus yet?