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WIP
Name:Kevin "Kev" Haggerty
Age:14
Aura Color: yellow


Abilities: unnatural speed, and night sight
Armor:
Appearance (words or pic): [img]http://i.kinja-img.com/gawker-media/image/upload/s--kg4i7bTI--/c_fit,fl_progressive,q_80,w_636/w7cgkmyelkdrwm8umq51.png[/img] minus the guns
Summoned weapon(s): Primary: long bladed curved sword. Secondary: throwing knives 
Backstory: Kevin was born into what can only be described as "American Ninja". Kevin's mother, a 5th generation Japanese American, and member of the Hayashi clan. while their clan still trains in the ancient art, many do not for military purposes but for meditative and traditional purposes, to practice their trade. In the Modern age prior to the founding of Aura many from this family excelled in sports, and even the military. During the modern times, the clan has once again taken up their practice for more On his Father side, Kevin comes from "true american blood" His father Andrew and family can go as far back to when the first British colonists. during the American Revolution ancestors of Kevin's father served in the Continental Army and saw action through out the entire war. During the American Civil war, Two ancestors served in the union and Confederate army. With ancestors who served in nearly every war the united states have ever fought, they are very proud of that fact. Even now the family is honored to have another of the family serving their country.
	Kevin was born in San Francisco, due to his Asian features he felt right at home among the other Asian cultures.
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In case you were waiting, looks good so far. Final judgement to come when you've finished.