[@Sodium] I'm sorry-- I thought I already messaged you. Everything looks good-- I would only suggest you get the bullet list into paragraph format by the deadline, but I think you mentioned already having plans to do that.

[@Crazy Doctor] I would strongly suggest adding what's going on with their powers in their backstories. Styvan is 25, so he would have had his powers for about 8 years now, but there's no mention of it? Also, could you edit Kayla's updated character sheet (assuming you made changes) in the post you first posted with her sheet? The one that's linked on the first post? I would rather everyone make edits to existing character sheets that way to avoid confusion.