I honestly didn't know this was a one-chance-only thing, to be honest. That, plus I'm not sure where I went wrong. You said that you wanted things to be more serious if the character had actual combat experience, so I went from simply kuudere to what I actually posted, but you mentioned lack of PTSD on the current version, so I'm not sure if I was too serious or not serious enough... or if it's a backstory issue, which could be corrected just by having more information available. Or if it's some sort of nebulous power issue. "I don't like where this has gone" is a rather vague rejection reason.

If you'd just explained, I could have fixed it. The thing I wanted to play was pretty simple ('experienced "big sister" type; not good with people). 

Though I'm not seeking to rejoin, slightly more detailed feedback than 'I like this' would hardly be amiss. Writing a bio and hoping that it fits the GM's preferences is a messy approach to character creation.