[@Mr_pink] 

He looks much better! Just one more little thing. The experimentation that caused your character's corruption should also have caused some physical or mental abnormalities. The drawback of having a burned hand is good, but you should probably add on something more permanent. Maybe your characters hands are clawed and permanently remain black? Perhaps your character is jumpy and paranoid from being around explosions all the time. Just suggestions. Please add in something similar to those and I'll give it another look!

[@Kimono]

Yes we are! Welcome! Feel free to ask me any questions you might have and post up a character template.