[quote=@vietmyke]
[@Athinar] a couple points.. 
-it is unlikely that he'd get discharged just for having his machine destroyed. Especially in wartime, the only real ways that he would get discharged is if he finished his service tour and quit(which doesn't seem to fit his character), got injured beyond the hope of being combat ready, or was caught doing something illegal. Otherwise he'd probably just get reassigned to a new unit. 
- I feel like I've said this before, but all shield generators have 5 wt, except for class 5 which weighs more and class 1 which weighs less. Also, how did he acquire a class 4 shield? That is a very expensive and very valuable piece of equipment. 
- Also, how did he acquire a Sentinel to modify in the first place? One doesn't just find upper tier UEE mechs just lying around.
- Your missile launcher is mounted on the back, but the external power cores are also mounted on the back.. This is a conflict. Also for missile launcher list the number of munitions it holds
- Same goes for your primary weapon, rate of fire, magazine size, and caliber please
- Your MAS balance is off, it appears to be at 34/30 WT and 34/40 power 
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1: Made the discharge voluntary. After such a trauma, and pressure from everyone else to quit, it would make sense for him to leave, right?
2: Whoops. Yeah, you did say that, now that I re-read the infotext. Sorry.
3: Changed the Shield Class to 2 and former MAS chassis he built on to a Sentry.
4: Removed the Missile launcher.
5: Added RoF, Mag. Size, and Caliber to the Valkyrie. 
6: I fixed the MAS balance... I think. Don't quote me on that, and I'll be rechecking the math as soon as I post this.