[@HHShetland] The gist of your character is good, but it is over the top at certain parts. -Master skills are no longer allowed, in addition, putting in weaknesses also does not automatically grant you skill points. Plus, lack of weapon and armor can be easily sidestepped by Tennant. You must reduce hand-to-hand to expert (at least), and choose one of the following. A; bust both athletics and unarmored to adept. B; lower one of them, but change woodworking and acrobatics to apprentice. -You said Do'Zaddha couldn't even remember Tennant's name but still saw him as more than a ticket to fame. What exactly do you mean here? How much did Do'Zaddha value Tennant? -Beating a troll with his bare hands in kind of a stretch, even for a expert. It's like killing a gorilla in a fist fight. I don't care if you're Hulk Hogan, Mike Tyson or Kim Jung-il, it's not gonna happen. He must need some kind of edge over the troll, whether that be the troll was injured, poisoned, or Tennant sneaked up on it. [@ClocktowerEchos]There are some issues, I can't accept it at this state. -Half-Orc is not gonna cut it, especially when it's his father's half. If he doesn't know exactly, put the race he looks like the most, or the one people associate him with the most. -Crossbows are rare tech on Tamriel. A band of "merry hunters" are not likely to have one, and even if they do, ammo is gonna be another problem. I advise switching to bow, or downgrading it to a semi-functional piece with less than 10 bolts. -Personality seems to be very brief and lacking, please expand with more details. -Please mind you writing, words and phrases like "sniper", "CQC" and "mountain climbing pick" do not fit the setting. For the the pick in particular, ice picks aren't invented until the 18th century. Before that, people used [url=https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alpenstock]Alpenstocks[/url]. -What is his hood really enchanted with? If you don't want to reveal to everyone else, at least PM Leiden and I.