[@Mortarion] Ok, the framework checks out, but I want you to expand in certain areas.

-I am a stiff ass when it comes to names. Kalien doesn't sound Saxhleel to me, either change to something more suitable or offer an explanation.

-Archon is more than half a world apart from Windhelm, how does his parents even know about Windhelm? 

-12 years with bloodlung sounds awfully rough. Any reason why he hasn't sought out medical attentions? Especially when he's in the college, with experts nearby practicing the "perfectly valid school of magic".

-Mistmen are exclusive to the Soul Cairn as far as I know. To be able to conjure these creatures, one would need to either visit the Soul Cairn, or learned from someone else who did. I don't see any of the two being mentioned, so please, remove this spell.