Think of it like how would you simply describe your character? A summary for all that you've written in. Hang on I think I have an old example... [quote=RainDash]Jak is a fifteen year old girl obsessed with softball and trying to help everyone. She's always smiling and offering ice cream to people. She tries to fight in close, protecting as many people as she can. She was born and raised in Venice, and her father has passed away recently.[/quote] You get the gist of character without having to read the whole sheet! Also, [@edgeout], I'll get to critiquing your character in a bit.