[@RainDash] No, thank you for your constructive criticism. I thought this was a casual RP, not an advanced one. I understand if you see CS as a resume for a job per say. However I considered it more like a friend showing off to a friend their made up hero. I can totally understand why Ambra would rather have you talk to me than herself.

That being said, I was looking for a casual RP, not an advanced one. Furthermore it a Fandom. I didn't think I needed to try as hard. A part of me doesn't want to RP here anymore. However I can see that you are experienced with RPing, and (if you and RP as well as you critique) are a good writer. I admit, that I didn't give my best to my character sheet.

So here's what I want to do. I will edit my character sheet one more time. This time I will put more effort into bits that I feel can be filled in. I will give the history of my character completely, and change my character's quirks. Personality, I might add a bit more. This will be the last edit I do, and if you still can't accept it, then I will withdraw from the RP.

The final edit will represent the amount of effort that I would like to put into this RP. I think it wouldn't be fair for either of us to have to read/write with more effort than wanted. I will post an update when I finish my editing.