[@edgeout] We don't need a novel for your character sheet. What we need is for you to explain things more thoroughly. Like... I would like to know more about his eye power! :) The way you explained it doesn't really, well, describe it, so it's a little confusing. We can't tell if it's OP or not. This is not an advanced RP-- it is casual, but we would like for you to make a character sheet that properly explains everything rather than leaving somethings vague. ^^

[@SeaFoamDaisies] I like the effort you put into your sheet. I can tell you put a lot of time into it, and for that, I smile. I simply can't make my form that in depth. ^^

Okay, time for the critiquing part. As Rain said, I hope that I do not offend you or seem like a jerk when I critique your sheet.

First of all, I would like to say that not every character has to start out knowing combat skills [i]or[/i] knowing someone who is part of the Vongola or is part of the Vongola themselves. We'd like some variety in our characters! ^^

Second of all, the format is a bit strange. The headers and all are nice, but for some reason so many spaces and the centering makes it a little hard on the eyes. While it really isn't [i]that[/i] noticeable in the personality section, it's more prominent in the history section. Maybe it would be better if you just formatted it without the headers.

Third of all, the history part is a little confusing. Especially the Aunt Sara part, which is a little too condensed and is a little all over the place. Miya really shouldn't have an understanding of her abilities-- Gokudera did not start out with Storm flames in the beginning of the anime even though he was part of the Vongola. 

That;s about it!