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[@SeaFoamDaisies] I like the effort you put into your sheet. I can tell you put a lot of time into it, and for that, I smile. I simply can't make my form that in depth. ^^

Okay, time for the critiquing part. As Rain said, I hope that I do not offend you or seem like a jerk when I critique your sheet.

First of all, I would like to say that not every character has to start out knowing combat skills [i]or[/i] knowing someone who is part of the Vongola or is part of the Vongola themselves. We'd like some variety in our characters! ^^

Second of all, the format is a bit strange. The headers and all are nice, but for some reason so many spaces and the centering makes it a little hard on the eyes. While it really isn't [i]that[/i] noticeable in the personality section, it's more prominent in the history section. Maybe it would be better if you just formatted it without the headers.

Third of all, the history part is a little confusing. Especially the Aunt Sara part, which is a little too condensed and is a little all over the place. Miya really shouldn't have an understanding of her abilities-- Gokudera did not start out with Storm flames in the beginning of the anime even though he was part of the Vongola. 

That;s about it!


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I don't mind criticism so knock yourself out!

I do use a lot of spaces and centre alligning coz it just looks aesthetically more appealing to me that way.
But no matter, I'll try to get rid of unnecessary spaces and the centre-ing~

I was in two minds regarding Miya's skills so this actually makes it easier for me.
I'll remove the part where it says she's already training and knows her abilities and stuff.

I arranged the history in a chronological order
Like it begins when she was a kid, goes on to her high school years and then talks about how she reached where she is now.
I'll remove the part about her aunt being affiliated with the Vongola, but you'll need to elaborate further on what history parts are confusing :s