HEAR YE, HEAR YE. I PRESENT TO YOU MY JUDGMENT!

[@urukhai] Okay, a few things.

1.) Heteromorphic races can't have 100 job level, you have to subtract your racial level from your allotted 100. So it should be 25+ racial level and 75 job level. 

2.) It seems like you should have to put more points into Doppelganger than Greater Doppelganger since the latter requires the former to unlock. I'd advise switching it to 15 levels in Doppelganger and 10 in Greater Doppelganger, since that's rarer.

3.) A lot of his spells seem more like skills, tbh. Might wanna move a few of them around into the skills section, like "Ignore me", "Dancer's Grace" and "Shadow Knife". Also Heart Attack is "Grasp Heart". 

Other than that just finish the sections you haven't filled out yet. It's kinda hard for me to judge a character without equipment or a bio :P

[@rivaan]

1.) Even disguised, an angel should still have some racial level. Also, if you removed the illusion, would she look like Victim or the more mechanical angels the Sunlight Scripture summoned?

2.) Spells look good, but I'd appreciate you being a little more detailed with her combat magic and general spells. 

3.) Why so many demonic/unholy sounding illusions? Seems kinda weird for an angel xD

4.) NPCs can't use Over-Rank Magic (or at least the Guardians couldn't)

5.) Veil of Avalon seems like a good item to allow an NPC to cast Over-Rank Magic. 10th is too weak for a level 100 NPC, since she should be able to cast that rank of magic on her own. This way you can keep Over-Rank Magic even though your character is an NPC while still limiting its use. 

[@RedDusk]

1.) Even though he was human before, those traits would make the Revenant an Undead race, which is heteromorphic. 

2.) Liking the berserker vibes here, but soul-stealing or feasting whatever is represented by stealing exp in YGGDRASIL, so his race probably just feeds off of blood or life force in general, not souls.

3.) You should probably have a few levels in "Others" for your racial levels, just so you don't have so many extra points in "Other" jobs xD

4.) Stats can't go beyond 100, they just become "Exceeds limit" like Ainz's MP

5.) Summon Portal is just "Gate"

6.) Explain what kind of mount is summoned. Just one word telling me what it is will do, like "Summon: Unicorn" or something like that.

7.) Blood Frenzy is already the name of a True Vampire skill/ability. Please change it.

8.) I love how he renamed the sword "GG". His backstory in general is great. He'll make a great addition to the team xD

[@Dead Cruiser] Thank you for reminding me that Relic and Legacy Class items are a thing. 

Guys? Relic and Legacy Class items are a thing. Adjust the relative rarity of your items accordingly.

Besides that and a few minor quibbles I'll only bring up if they ever become relevant, Nostromo looks great. Amazing, really. You've made a profile here that equals or even surpasses the sheer obsessive attention to detail I put into mine xD

I look forward to RPing with dear Nostromo.