[quote=@Dead Cruiser] Cool stuff. Should I post the CS in the character section? What were the small issues that you had? Incidentally, regarding Nostromo's created NPCS, I plan on making a ghost librarian to manage his Librarium, and she will probably be about a level 40 or 50 character. The other would be something like a Werewolf manservant/bodyguard, similar to Sebas Tien. This character would probably be level 100. If anyone was interested in playing this, I'm open to collaboration. [/quote] Nah, it was nothing. Go ahead and post him in the character tab. [quote=@ArtifactCreator] [hider=W.I.P] [b]Name(s):[/b] [list] [*]_______ - (Left as blank) [*]Sahar [/list] [b]Gender:[/b] [list] [*]Male[/list] [b]Height:[/b] [list] [*] 210 cm [/list] [b]Race:[/b] [list] [*][color=yellow]Asura[/color], a race that is more of a myth than reality as those who are seen as Asura are spread far and wide, having never seen two at the same place before or even one in public. Rumors about this race are even scarce as little to no information is known about them except for their tremendous amount of strength rivaling and even some say defeating the trolls and their unique 3 pairs of arms they possess. Known to philosophical pacifists capable of great feats with their spirituality but are very capable combatants when the situation calls for it. Those who undergo the Asura race are restricted to martial arts and hand-to-hand combat limiting on their usefulness and coverage but gain a tremendous skill boosts towards unarmed melee skill. [/list] [b]Title:[/b] [list] [*]Atlas, Bearer of the World [*]The Archetype of Strength[/list] [b]Job:[/b] [list] [*][b]Entity of Outer Strength:[/b] A specialized class for the Asura race that rewards those who followed their spiritual training along with their conditioning, it combines a calm and focused mind with the conditioned body to preform feats of unbelievable strength. They are the strongest race and class in the game who are second to none in terms of pure stats and can easily overwhelm the defenses of other with their devastating attacks. However the majority of their skills all possess necessarily a long cool down to rest both the mind and body for preforming such a daunting feat. [*][b]Avatar of Inner Peace:[/b] Another specialized class that rewards Asura character who undergo spiritual training and combine it with conditioning, it focuses of the character's defenses. Mastering the class will allow the character to enter a state of peace of mind by meditating, which exchanges all of their physical attack stat and covert it into magical attack and defense. While in this mode, all melee attacks are disable and instead gains a variety of spells to use in this mode. While in this state of calm, all mental debuffs are ineffective on the character and all damage is reduced by 20%. However to maintain this state, mana is drained every time they are hit along with every second passing until they are drained. [*][b]Black Belt:[/b] The upgraded version of martial artist, it is a class devoted on using various forms of martial arts. Being proficient and knowing various school such as karate, judo and tae-kwon-do but not limited to them as there are many others. The class allows the body to move fluidly and use the least amount of wasted action and energy to preform melee moves, without being clumsy. It is usually a class requiring combos in order to successfully pull off, but when they happen, the results can debuff the victim depending on what finisher is used. Since the various forms of martial arts, this class can be leveled up to level 30. [/list] [b]Residence:[/b] [list] [*]For all player characters this should be the guild base. For NPCs be specific about which area.[/list] [b]Alignment:[/b] [list] [*]Neutral Good[/list] [b]Sense of Justice:[/b] [list] [*]200[/list] [b]Racial level:[/b] [list] [*]Realized (15) [*]Awaken (10) [*]Materialized (10) [*]Avatar (5)[/list] [b]Job level:[/b] [list] [*]Entity of Outer Strength: (5) [*]Avatar of Inner Peace: (5) [*]Black Belt: (30) [*]Martial Artist: (15) [*][/list] [b]Stats:[/b] [list] (670) <-- Trying to find something to nerf [*]HP: 150 [*]MP: 20 [*]PHY. ATK: 130 [*]PHY. DEF: 90 [*]AGILITY: 110 [*]MAG. ATK: 10 [*]MAG. DEF: 80 [*]RESIST: 60 [*]SPECIAL: 20 [/list] [b]Spells:[/b] [list] [*][s]FIHAHBALL!!! - DEAL OVER 9000 FIRE DMG, TOO STRONGK[/s][/list] [b]Skills:[/b] [list] [*]The realm of warriors, and their magic equivalent. Similar to the Martial Arts of the New World but not quite, Skills are basically spells or techniques that warriors can use a limited number of times per day. Again, not many of these have been mentioned in canon, so you're free to use your imaginations.[/list] [b]Equipment:[/b] [list] [*]List all your worn and equipped items along with their class (Divine, World etc.). For simplicity's sake, this includes weapons. Feel free to be creative! Remember, not much has been established in canon.[/list] [b]Bio:[/b] [list] [*]What was your character’s story before coming to the New World? What are they like as a person?[/list] [b]Other:[/b] [list] [*]Other miscellaneous stuff and/or gags.[/list] [/hider] Dis is hard, I still have a lot of stuff to do ~^~ [edit- I justed deleted all my skills, I am gonna go cry now] [/quote] Asura is actually a job, not a race (Cocytus has it!). And what do I keep telling people about yellow being only for human races?! >.<