[@BlackPanther] The bio is a little better, and the personality too. But the bio still needs a lot of work; It's just way too vague. There's evidence in there that shows you haven't done any research into the backstory of your character. You've stated he was around in "Pirate days" where he and his crew attacked "Royal Members". Royal members of what? What century was this? What's their usual pirate run? You haven't even stated which country Vladimir is from, nor how he acquired his crew, nor if his crew members knew about his supernatural nature - and chances are if they too weren't human, they would have abandoned or killed him because of his nature. Also, why did he decide to just go solo one night? I would assume they're attacking ships from their own ship, so it would be hard to hide it from his crew. And here's something I have a real issue with: He was infected via Vampire Bite. In the world of Supernatural, to become a Vampire, one must ingest a fair amount of blood from the Vampire to be turned. Ergo, it's rarely by accident. Despite the work you're putting in on the character, it's making me think you haven't researched at all. I'm also still not happy with the difficulty in killing him - the combination of creatures that he is wouldn't give him that much power. Beheading should be enough - nothing beyond that. I've also been taking a look at some of your other roleplays, and the quality of your posts - all I'll say is that I'll be demanding more than what you're used to in this roleplay.