[@The_written_John]

Depression itself isn't edgy, its the way you portrayed it. Like I said, you're writing reminds me of a preteen emo's attempt at philosophical fanfiction. Grimdark backstories were never all that okay in the first place, just somewhat tolerated. I don't see an issue if someone has a troubled life, but when [i]everything[/i] about their life is sadness and tears, that's an issue since no one's life is like that. Everyone has something to look up too and something that makes them happy.

If you're definition of "weakness" is something relating to mental health, then by your definition, a majority of the characters in the RP have no significant weakness. I know that Alec isn't exactly me best work, but at least I'm not super salty about it if people point out any major flaws to it.

To everyone else in the RP, feel free to go look over my CS again. If there's anything I need to change or edit that's sensible I'll look into it.