[quote=@White Feather]
[@The_written_John]
Well, I'm okay with it. Rather florid, but looks good. [b]Approved[/b]

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Sounds like you want to voice your concerns. I figured having a character wiser than his age would make him unique, it would be different from the usual standard brother tropes, and help to spark plenty of argumentative discussion, at least thats what i intended when creating him, though if you have problems, please, voice them, il reassure you with any issues you think a character like him would bring up.