Really sorry about my absence guys - I've been feeling pretty 'ick' recently and decided to take a wee holiday from the guild to get my writing back up to standard. I didn't want to be writing crap because I was feeling crap, if you get me.

[@Demarcus]
Nice start - Could I perhaps have a little more detail in the biography? Maybe elaborate on what his childhood was like, how we met this witch, why they fell out, etc. I'm not looking for tiny details like what size dress she was, just something to flesh it out a bit more. In a high casual roleplay, I'd like a wee bit more than one paragraph for the background. :)
Oh, and I think he'd have some muscles if he's trained in MMA. Perhaps you could describe him as wiry, or athletic? 

[@The Kid Lantern]
Double-posting is fine, especially in this slow beginning stage. As mentioned, I wasn't posting anything for a few days, so I'm still working on my collab with [@Angel Vicky] - who I also apologize to, for once again, not posting anything.