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Yeah he already mentioned all this to me so I'm going to help him make Johnny a real boy now instead of NPC'd!


He was already a real boy, your F4 would've just been handicapped had I kept him LOL

Sucks too cause I love that new suit he's sporting in Uncanny Avengers and Uncanny Inhumans.

~KL~
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He was already a real boy, your F4 would've just been handicapped had I kept him LOL

Sucks too cause I love that new suit he's sporting in Uncanny Avengers and Uncanny Inhumans.

~KL~


Nope I meant what I said... I GAVE YOU A CHANCE KL! YOU DIDN'T TAKE IT!

I'D TOLD YOU I'D SHOOT! BUT YOU DIDN'T BELIEVE ME! WHHYYYYYYY WOULDN'T YOU BELIEVE ME?!!?!?!
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Player Name: ChildHoodRuined
Character You Wish To Play: Miles Morales
Moral Alignment (Hero, Villain, Walking the Line): Hero
Affiliation (what group/team/organization, if any, is your character affiliated with?):(In 1610 universe.) S.H.I.L.E.D (spelling shield wrong was a pun), Young Ultimate's.

Character Origin & Backstory:
Beginning (1610)

A few months after Norman Osborn was arrested by the S.H.I.E.L.D, and his identity as the Green Goblin was revealed to the public, Osborn Industries was left abandoned. Nearly two months before Peter Parker's death, a criminal named Aaron Davis broke into Osborn industries. Unknown to Aaron Davis, a spider genetically enhanced with a OZ formula crawled into his bag.

Miles Morales decides to visit his uncle, against his parents order. While sitting on his uncles bag, a spider crawled out and bit Miles hand while he was eating a lollipop, causing him to pass out for a long amount of time. Later, when Miles awakened from his slumber, his dad was having a conversation with his uncle Aaron Davis. After the conversation, Miles escaped from Aaron's apartment.


While hiding from his father on the street, Miles noticed that he was more faster than usual when he ran over to hide from his father, when he noticed that he could climb walls, he noticed that he was becoming a mutant, or that's what he thought he was becoming. Alerted, Miles ran to his friend, Ganke, and confessed his new-found abilities. Ganke was amazed and did some research and discovered that Spider-Man got his powers by a spider-bit like Miles did. This gave Miles to climb walls and fire webs out of his wrist. However, Miles' just wanted to be normal, his father often lectured about mutants and rejecting them.

The next day, Miles and his friend Ganke ask about the spider-bite and Aaron confesses that he doesn't know ANYTHING about the spider. He didn't remember anything about the spider, convinced that his uncle, Aaron was telling the truth. The two back away and do more research on the spider bite. As the two study the spider bite and the traits that change Miles' they discover that he also had Spider-Strength and was enabled to do what a normal human being can't do. He was super-human.

The next day and a couple weeks, Miles snuck out and created a make-shift costume to save Spider-Man, but not in time, Spider-Man was killed. Blaming himself for the death of Spider-Man, Miles made it up that he would have to take the mantle of Spider-Man and fight crime. Discovering his powers and knowing the guideline of what a true hero is suppose to take care of, Miles creates his own costume and becomes the NEW Ultimate Spider-Man.

Career

For a brief 5 months, Miles decided to spend most of his time getting to know New York and the moral of becoming the Ultimate Spider-Man. After discovering what Peter had to go through, Miles had a tough life in New York city after his father died from a car-crash that he couldn't stop. Only with his mother, Miles soon revealed his identity to his mother, revealing that he was the new Ultimate Spider-Man. Soon enough, Miles had discovered more secrets of New York.
Meanwhile Miles still had time to learn as the new Ultimate Spider-Man, he wonders and tries to hunch on the fact that he got his powers. For a short time, Miles had a science project with Gwen Stacy, using this time to get to know Peter much better, he discovers what he is suppose to do as the Ultimate Spider-Man.

After lecturing with Gwen Stacy, Miles' tunes into the news channel and discovers that his uncle, (The Prowler) is about to kill his mother. Alerted and ready, Miles suits up and takes down his uncle.

After 5 months of his brief career, The Ultimate Spider-Man attempts to take a new threat, a thug.

Cletus Kasday meets Miles in a cell and tells the boy that his uncle, Aaron Davis worked with him once, Miles believes that the thug is lying, the thug pulls out a remote, and a portal shows up, grabbing Miles.
New Universe, New Hero Buisness

After discovering he was in a different timeline, Miles' plays low and realizes another Spider-Man is in the universe, slowly slipping into his suit when Spider-Man wasn't at the scene, Miles noticed that the Peter Parker that was in the universe, didn't know that he knew his identity.
Discovering about the portal that swooped him up into a different timeline, Miles' Morales soon stopped different villains and learned about a time-chain. After proving he was worthy enough of being the new Ultimate Spider-Man, the Ultimate Spider-Man went back to business trying to create something that would tune him back into his current timeline, failing to do so, Miles Morales was trapped in a different universe.
After a while, Miles took on the name 'Kid-Spider' and fought with Spider-Woman on a tough debate over if he was really Kid-Spider. Spider-Woman & Kid-Spider became enemies and never encountered after the fight, but Miles does remember that he got knocked out pretty bad and he couldn't use his powers for a while.

Going by a different name; "The Red-Spider." Miles Morales discovered more of his skills and soon built advanced web shooters to take on Spider-Woman again, this time she was covered in the symbiotic substance and this made it hard for Miles to take her out. Until Miles discovered that he needed to make the bell ring for her to snap out of the symbiote.

While swinging in an alley, Miles almost went plummeting into the ground, this gave him the idea of making multiple web shooters and also a secret base of operations. After learning how to control his anger and control his issues, Miles turned 14 by the time he created another Spider-Man costume.


Miles learned that he would always cause chaos if he was trying to create peace around New York city, either way, he always learned as the Amazing Ultimate Spider-Man.

Now.

Miles is known as a vigilante and he went by the name, The Masked Spider and soon met Felicia Hardy, who pulled off crimes. Miles also pulled this off with her, only to show her to the cops. Recently, he has found even more villians around the city and unpopularity known for his appearance at a bank robbery.


Powers and Abilities (What can your character do? What can't they do?):

Healing Factor

Because he is immortal, it might also mean that he can regenerate fast from any injuries.

Energy Burst

A random technique that will only occur when under extreme stress.

Spider-Camoflauge

Miles, including his clothing can hide in crowds with his suit, and in physical appearance, he can also use this to sneak up on enemies or flee away.

Super-human Strength

Mile holds a lot of strength, he can pack up a 100% punch that might kill a normal human being, but he decides to use little-less power. Under extreme stress, his punches are stronger than usual, even if he is not trying to punch as hard as he can.

Spider-Sense

When danger is present, Miles will get a 'tingle' in his head and quickly react according to his senses.
Superhuman Reflexes

The Ultimate Spider-Man's reflexes are enhanced and 10 times greater than a normal human beings reflexes. Allowing him to react fast and doge bullets as fast as he can, Miles can avoid attacks and is fast with agility.

Weaknesses

The only biggest weakness is in situations when it comes to something like morals, which gives Miles' a hard decision of picking what to do in tough occasions.

The only thing that Miles mainly rely on is his spider-strength which allows him to do enhanced abilities that a normal human being can't do, but if he uses to much of his ability, this may cause him to collapse or pass out, or maybe run out of spider-strength.

If Miles is swinging to much on his web, he may go plummeting into the street, if he doesn't save his webbing.

Heights.
Heights will most likely frighten Miles when he is in tough occasions, or when fighting a villain in air and swinging. He has fear of being in the air too long and falling to his death.

Sample Story Arcs: Give 2-3 ideas on where you want to go with your character.

I want to take this character to the center of the universe as a Kid-Spider most likely? Well, yeah. His name is Kid-Spider. Wait, just kidding, it's not. I want to make him important, he is important, but I want him to be a sidekick of the Amazing Spider-Man.

If I can, I probably want to make this Spider-Man more of a dramatic type that always blames himself over things that he didn't do, sorta like Peter Parker.

Well, I also want to make this character a bit more 'bravery' type. Re-imagining him in a different way, but I want him to be in a different universe because.. I know I could of done this universe, but I want him to make a different kinda impact. So I had Dr. Octopus throw him into a different dimension.
Sample Post (This is used as an introduction to your writing – try to keep it to around three paragraphs or more and try to include dialogue):



There. It was finally time to inaugurate the new Spider-Man to the public, Miles thought as he finished sketching his own image of his suit. It wasn't bad at all, it just needed a bit of red into it. But that would be copying Peter, Miles thought hopelessly as he sighed deeply. Why was he always so lonely? It was driving him crazy, before he was dragged into a different dimension by Otto Octavis, Miles could remember his mother screaming. But it's not going to take THAT long for him to get back to his universe, he just needed to seek knowledge. But, what if he ends up staying? Chaos was always going on at his hometown, he was sure if he came back he would be dead in a second. Miles emitted a long deep sigh, with such emotion, Miles took off his rucker T baseball hat, setting it down gently on his bed. No matter how hard he tried, chaos would always just strike harder. Miles felt like he could relate to what he was going through to Peter, he didn't feel normal anymore, he was stuck in a different timeline. It was like being stuck in a box. Miles turned around to glare at his computer, beginning to think as if he was crazy. He wasn't just lucky for being Spider-Man.
It was meant for him to be Spider-Man.
Miles darted toward his laptop, reaching quickly to turn on his laptop. While he was waiting for his laptop to load, he didn't know why he was on another universe. But for whatever reason wasn't just lucky. It wasn't meant to happen.

Miles felt zonked, his stomach making a small groan. First he was bitten by a spider, now he's in a different timeline, how could it get worse? Miles set his laptop, gently on his lap, holding his laptop in his clutches, standing up. He backed up to sit on the bed, finally, the computer had finally turned on. Miles began to type in his username, but before he could even touch a key on the keyboard---, his spider-sense warned him. Danger was present. Miles quickly began to set his laptop away and quickly hid under his bed as the door was being pushed open.

Miles was under his bed by the time the door was pushed open. Miles hesitated, shivering, what if it was Dr. Octopus? What if it was someone who was searching to kill him or have him captured? Quickly, Miles was alerted. As the man shut the door silently, the man solidly approached Miles computer. It looked like the man wasn't playing around, Miles thought, as he rolled out under the bed. Quickly, Miles motioned himself in a fighting posture. As the stranger slowly turned around, Miles realized he was holding a gun in his hand.
In a few seconds, Miles thought that he wouldn't be breathing anymore. Frightened, Miles backed away from the man, hitting onto a desk that was right behind him. The gun was already aimed in the direct sight, as the man was about to pull the trigger on the gun, Miles had already been occupied with something that helped him out of the case scenario. Frightened almost to death, the man panicked and sprinted out of Miles base.
Miles emitted a long deep breath, how did the man enter his base first of all? What did the man see to even run away? Miles wondered to himself, walking to the door to peer out of the room. The man was still racing down the hallway.

"Pathetic."
Miles shut the door and began to put on his costume to roam the streets as the Ultimate Spider-Man.

"I love my life!" Miles yelled out in joy.



Spider-Woman doesn't currently exist in this timeline.
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Spider-Woman doesn't currently exist in this timeline.


^ This, plus you still have yet to fix the issues that I have already mentioned.

@ChildHoodRuined

I still feel that the first paragraph of your character sheet remains too plagiarized.

Here is your first paragraph and the first paragraph on Marvel Wikia that correspond to yours. The bold highlight identical phrases. I do have to say that after looking over the application, the other paragraphs are much better.





While you did fix the whole situation dealing with using a dead character (Cletus Kasday was only mentioned in the Ultimate Spider-Man run), it still leaves many questions unanswered. How did Cletus Kasday get a symbiote (Venom already absorbed the 1610 Carnage into itself) and how did he get that device? Why would he have it? If you wanted these answered to be left as a "mystery" that will be revealed as the roleplay advances, then I would like you to PM me the answers to these questions so that I, as the GM, can know what is going on.

Also, you still mention Doc Ock in your sample post.
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^ This


Yay recognition :P
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Nope I meant what I said... I GAVE YOU A CHANCE KL! YOU DIDN'T TAKE IT!

I'D TOLD YOU I'D SHOOT! BUT YOU DIDN'T BELIEVE ME! WHHYYYYYYY WOULDN'T YOU BELIEVE ME?!!?!?!


An F4 without Johnny in there for the origin and solo wouldn't have worked with what you wanted to do for the rest of them [like making geniuses all teenagers...] and I didn't wanna step on any toes since you had another player already down for whatever iteration you came up with. I wish I'd have saved the CS and posts somewhere, but the initial idea I had was based off of a failed tv series centered around a solo Torch with a new origin tied to the golden age android Human Torch and his creator. The voice I gave Sue in my posts and calling Johnny 'little brother' carried over to 3D Man's older brother.

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On a side note, no takers for an Archangel team-up? He needs to meet more people before he does anything with the broader universe and teams and the like... If nothing else I could dust off 3D Man and introduce another Skrull secret agent disguised as a lame villain for the team up. I really didn't wanna do much with him with the Skrulls coming up down the line but one more secret agent wouldn't hurt.

~KL~
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@The Kid Lantern I can't help unless you want to enter the AvengerVerse...

Even then I think I have my first (Initial starting) lineup picked for our first beat down.
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I'd rather him eventually go down the Avenger path rather than retreat to the X-verse. The idea was to get into him being a billionaire playboy philanthropist a bit while he settles into becoming a hero in his own right. His company will mostly be cheaper medicines and pharmaceuticals, with their own manufacturing buildings, distributing vans for NYC and trucks for anything out of state, and R&D labs. More biology and less technology.

He would seem kinda repetitive though with FalCap in the team with his man-made wings and all. But if shit gets too heavy he could be a reserve and know a few Avengers from team-ups and stuff. His blood can heal others, I'd imagine in an alien war situation or robot invasion that'd be kinda useful.

~KL~
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I'd rather him eventually go down the Avenger path rather than retreat to the X-verse. The idea was to get into him being a billionaire playboy philanthropist a bit while he settles into becoming a hero in his own right. His company will mostly be cheaper medicines and pharmaceuticals, with their own manufacturing buildings, distributing vans for NYC and trucks for anything out of state, and R&D labs. More biology and less technology.

He would seem kinda repetitive though with FalCap in the team with his man-made wings and all. But if shit gets too heavy he could be a reserve and know a few Avengers from team-ups and stuff. His blood can heal others, I'd imagine in an alien war situation or robot invasion that'd be kinda useful.

~KL~


I'm keeping the "Invasion" out of Arc1(Mini spoiler) just to not repeat the MCU.

Also we will have two rosters going eventually not to mention back ups. Not to mention anything of alternate teams co-existing. We'll see what happens with the Avengers later on.

Team ups I'd say look at people who aren't currently doing anything/finishing something up and bringing them in for something. Come visit Doom, he'll find use for you :P
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Yeah with two Caps now I figured there'd be some shake-ups later on. Did you ever plan on making your Cap take on the Falcon alias?

~KL~

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Yeah with two Caps now I figured there'd be some shake-ups later on. Did you ever plan on making your Cap take on the Falcon alias?

~KL~


I'm not sure what he'll call himself when @Facepunch emerges from the ice. Though I think the current plan will be for FalCap to keep leading the Avengers till Cap is a bit more settled. Whether or not it changes hands we'll find out.

Hell, Wilson could take on a more advisory position and put the wings down! We'll find out down the line I guess.

The important thing is, the Avengers will have a base but other members will likely come and go. So you have the possibility to join up at some point :P

I need to make a doc to keep my list upto date...

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Oh, @Facepunch are you up for having Hyperion come and meet America? Got her to call SHIELD to pick up the guys she apprehended so you could have him tag along with them. Both for recruitment, and as Drew said, to see what she knows about him.
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Hey look, its @Byrd Man
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@natty I'll be working on the Amazing Friends post for the next thirty or so minutes. Just fyi.
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@Natty Yeah, sounds good. I'll post when I get home. Still at school, atm.

@SepI dunno about a name just yet. Probably Captain Rogers or Nomad or something.

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@SepI dunno about a name just yet. Probably Captain Rogers or Nomad or something.


Pfft, you'll get Captain America back.

Wilson will be more than happy to give up the star and stripes uniform.
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Doctor Victor Von Doom brings you...

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@Sep: Definitely have this in a separate thread so that things do not become confusing.
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FUTURE IMPERFECT

Oh the possibilities!

Like there's...





or even
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@Sep: Definitely have this in a separate thread so that things do not become confusing.


Will do "ASM - Future Imperfect"

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Oh the possibilities!

Like there's...





or even


Oh so many :P

If you go Miss.America you can try and reclaim the shield :P
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