[quote=@Zeroth] I suppose I should ask then what the "standard" is--like the route I wanted to go was "that one guy who can't shoot energy or manipulate the elements, but who can break down walls with his face." What kind of things could one expect to see from normal Qi enhancement as opposed to a specialist? Also I did have some spins in mind to put on it, revolving around specific types of enhancement as opposed to just "overall faster and stronger." If I'd like to reveal things like "secret techniques," as we go along, should I PM you to get all of those cleared first? [/quote] Well, I mean... Body-strengthening is what I mean, not all that fancy stuff like shooting blasts at people. That's not standard in the least; borderline magic at that point (which... Yeah.) Body-strengthening's about it, really. And... Yeah, sure, PM me about that. It's always better to clarify earlier than later. [@Classpet]: So... I mean, other than the fact that Anata's a weird name (coming as someone who takes Japanese, it's really just an informal way of saying 'you', but minor details bleh), both forms seem pretty okay. Though I would like to call into question the reason as to why nobody decided to follow such a big moneymaker (in Hiruki), it seems like a good thing to maybe use in the future so I'll let you leave that as-is.