[quote=@Leidenschaft] Look at those dirty, dirty criminals in that list too. [/quote] Hey now, it wasn't Keegan's fault the other dumbass burned down a theater, just a big misunderstanding. For the other scoundrels, well, not sure if they can be redeemed... If excessive facial hair was a crime, Jorwen's head would have been long chopped off, seeing it is easier to cut it off than cutting his beard off. [quote=@Chrononaut] Vurwe Highorin [/quote] What's this? Fresh meat? Welcome, let's make some cuts before we get you cooking. 5'6 is basically an Altmer midget, combined with her age, 17, Vurwe seems too juvenile for her experiences. Being exiled due to her lineage is reasonable, but traveling the entirety of High Rock and playing Breton politics is less so for a grammar-school aged kid. I would, however, accept her background if you bump the age to 25+ and either increase her height to 6+ feet or an explanation for abnormal shortness. What is that dagger made of? Anything specific about it? Modifications or enchantments? 500 is a damn big stash of gold. Given her background, I actually have no problem with Vurwe owning that much. However, carrying that much in person doesn't sound practical to me. Try storing some in banks or converting to smaller valuables. Everything else checks out, your sheet is pretty neat, precise and concise, I like it.