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What's this? Fresh meat?

Welcome, let's make some cuts before we get you cooking.

5'6 is basically an Altmer midget, combined with her age, 17, Vurwe seems too juvenile for her experiences. Being exiled due to her lineage is reasonable, but traveling the entirety of High Rock and playing Breton politics is less so for a grammar-school aged kid. I would, however, accept her background if you bump the age to 25+ and either increase her height to 6+ feet or an explanation for abnormal shortness.

What is that dagger made of? Anything specific about it? Modifications or enchantments?

500 is a damn big stash of gold. Given her background, I actually have no problem with Vurwe owning that much. However, carrying that much in person doesn't sound practical to me. Try storing some in banks or converting to smaller valuables.

Everything else checks out, your sheet is pretty neat, precise and concise, I like it.
  

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Made suggested changes, also considering the dagger could be an elven dagger (moonstone, quicksilver, steel) specifically enchanted to glow when lowborns are nearby (any humanoid who is not an Altmer, primary races).

[quote=@Peik]
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Typical, a Nord solve all their problems through base violence. That's why we gave Skyrim to the Dovahkiin, of our own accord.