[quote=@MiddleEarthRoze] [@KazeXDZ] Good start, but there's definitely some changes necessary here. First of all: Get rid of Alexandria's Genesis. It's not real. So, no enhanced sight or purple eyes. Secondly, there's no way in Hell a troupe of different species would group together under the control of a Djinn just to fuck over one family in particular. First of all, Vampires only really travel in packs of their own kind, so it's easier to get food that way; Werewolves are mindless animals during a full moon and total lone wolves, and in human form, are totally useless, and probably don't even know about their condition in the first place. From what I can gather from Crocottas, they seem to be pretty rare, and judging by the way they live and feed, I can't see it joining a gang of supes. Likewise with an Arachne. Just change it to seven Djinn - it's canon that they do have families, and will return for revenge, so that's fine. Thirdly, this Angel-Demon hybrid. I'm guessing this is another person with another character, but I'll just save you the trouble with a big ol' Hell No. It's not possible. Make those changes, and you're good to go. [/quote] Having helped him when making his character, I can explain a few things. The Alexandria's Genesis thing can be changed. There are other ways to have naturally occurring purple eyes. The group of monsters, they all joined in together because the Ravencroft family had hurt them in some way. I'll talk to him about the werewolf. Yes, the Angel/Demon is someone else's character. He's been working with someone to improve him but, currently, he is half human, quarter angel, quarter demon.