I do plan on finishing my CS today, I just need to make her bio and skill set.

EDIT:
Also, I didn't know if I should make it clear in the Initiation part that Hero was able to take down the crocodile on the basis of knowledge that all the strength in a crocodile's jaw is in biting rather than opening, thus it would be easy to keep the mouth shut. There was no clear transition to put it in, so I didn't, but I don't know if that'll be a really important tidbit later.