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[@Kentsukan]

Jayda is, she is actually seriously annoyed! 

In addition, I made some altercations to Jayda's family and past which I'll deliver in a pm to you ASAP so you can alter the needed areas. Namely her siblings names have changed and turns out Hymo isn't a traditional type, so she wouldn't have a padawan braid. However I can have it where Sish cut off a chuck of her braid, and Calista can use that. Easy fix. 

From the first skim with what you have so far, I can tell you that you might want to go into a bit more depth of your flaws. Like how they affect her and show, and any other information you think should be noted. A few more inform on her basics, which include limitations or weaknesses in key areas. A few more skills outside combat and possibly more unique to her would be nice. ;) However, the rough draft looks very nice in the early stages. 


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I can make those changes tomorrow. Though, may I ask what you mean by skills unique to her? 

Also, I think it's fair to warn and say that once school starts in late January, I'm going to be getting really busy and may have trouble making posts.