General Information
Name: Evergreen Lemõsè
Age: 230 (looks 19)
Gender: female
Title: none
Species: elf
Alliance: dragonian
Okay, so a lot of people don't understand the title bit. But basically, it's an honorific; for instance, nowadays in English speaking countries, people call doctors Dr., married women Mrs, single women Miss, ambiguous women Ms., and men Mr. However, because it has a high fantasy element and a hierarchy similar to medieval Europe (kingdoms, etc. etc.) in place of these we have Madam, Lady, Princess, etc. It's a show of hierarchy.
Relationship Information
Sexuality: virgin
Sexuality does not infer a person's sexual experience, rather a person's sexual feelings towards another being. Homosexual, Heterosexual, Sapiosexual, Asexual, the list goes on.
Siblings: one half-brother, a Japanese human swordsman by the name of "ketsueki kuchi"
Not much of the world has been noted, but considering it's fantasy, "Japanese" or "American" or any other ethnicity may not necessarily exist in this land.
Personality
Evergreen used to think of herself as the queen of the forest... at the young age of 20. She lives in the tree tops, feasting on berries and nuts, always weary, never trusts anyone when she first meets them. She has very few friends, preferring to be secluded and alone. Definitely not a fan of anything artificial.
This in itself does not tell people much at all about her personality. A CS is like a guideline to a character in order to understand how another character may react to her and conversely. However, seeing her CS, I have no idea how Sabira or Elspeth would feel about Evergreen. Instead, it seems as if this character is rather a stereotypical unfleshed character: the lone female protagonist who hates other people until a man comes and melts her heart.
When making a character, it is good to think of what her flaws are, what her good points are, and how she can grow as a character/person.
Skills: an arrowsmith and archer, as well as being skilled with a Japanese tanto knife, she is a force to reckoned with on the battlefield. At home however, she is a gardener.
What are her weaknesses?
Biography:
born in to a family very low down in the hierarchy, evergreen was always looked down upon by everyone. She was the laughing stock of all the noble families and always the "peasant tree" or "that one rotting apple" and her personal favourite: "you there, move."
She was the daughter of a silversmith and a maid; which never gave her much hope in the fun game of "your mother sucks because:"; a childhood favourite of everyone except herself.
Her fortune turned when she entered the eleven school of woodland magic and fighting, when on a mandatory ambassador tour, the Prince noticed her and took a special liking to her, for her talent and looks. Suddenly she had become the big name, the adopted daughter of the king of elves.
But it all changed when the fire nation attacked king was assassinated, and the royal family exiled from the treetops. Forever. She lived in the forest for many years; feeding on berries, honing her skills and fining out her fighting technique.
It was sheer luck; or maybe fate; that brought her upon the emerald green egg that held the spawn of a dragon.
How did this affect her as a person? How did she feel about the events that transpired? More details should also be provided, reading this, I am still lost as to who Evergreen is as a character.
Something else for everybody is that presentation can change how people perceive a character a lot. And I don't mean you have to have fancy writing, or fancy pictures, or a fancy setup, but grammar, nice syntax, correct sentence structure can make your character go a long way. I'm only mentioning this as a way for people to grow as writers. What helps me is thesaurus.com, as well as writing everything in a word document (or google docs, which is free) first in order to spellcheck.
@WhiteStar19
Would it be preferred to have one gender over the other? It's not like J will change appearance every post or anything like that.
I think what Whitestar means is preferred pronoun. What would J prefer to be called, by female pronouns (she/her) or male pronouns (he/his) or perhaps even singularly-used plural pronouns (they/their)? Also, is J agendered as in they do not prefer to be any gender at all, or genderfluid where sometimes J feels like a girl and sometimes feels like a boy?