[quote=@j8cob] I need to finish my shit but I keep looking at everyone else's characters instead of mine... [@Blue Demon] Noriko is still good, but I don't like the "medical mode" technique that Umary has. For one it's a game technique and for two it's vague. I'm not gonna say to remove it but I'd like it if you personally defined it better to detail her rate of regeneration and her approximate increase in physical output. Likewise I don't like Chieko's "lighting instantaneous" because it is very similar to Body Flicker. I see you already put a limit on it regarding use in combat, but even still it's basically a get-out-of-jail-free card. Unless Partisan or Savato say it's cool, I'd like that to be removed. Otherwise they seem good. I like their personalities and how they tie in together. Once those changes are made you'll have my approval of all three, though I already approve Noriko. [/quote] I'll work on editing that later. I need to go do chores... and I keep putting them off. >_>