Just to piss off everyone, I'll do my review in blue.
I don't really have any issues with this character. Seems fun, doesn't seem broken. Her ninjutsu game is pretty strong for someone who isn't a heavy hitter but not so much as to be unacceptable. It also mentions she uses lots of kunai but you omitted the weapons section. A small thing, but I'd like it if you fixed that.
All in all I give her a pass. Just be sure to address the small things before I go full on anal retentive about it.
“Yeah, I am that guy's sister. No, I won't get you a date with him. Why? Because he doesn't freakin' like dudes!”
This is already gold.
Standing at a not even surprising 1.64 meters and a rather slim and flimsy frame, it is Amatsurahashi Kanata.
Like her brother, she has fiery red hair and blue eyes, but neither of them are as well cared for as his. In fact, her brother likes to point out the split ends her hair might have.
Her hair is long and usually kept in a pair of twintails that reach her waist. Because men like something to hold on to
Her blue eyes are big and have been called cute several times, by relatives and her mother, mainly.
Her fair skin does have some cream put into it but not the ungodly amounts her brother uses. Like other men, she fears she might catch fire if she imitates her brother.
Her frame is slim but well trained, as expected of any shinobi. The problem lies in her chest, something she has a strong complex about and what often makes others confuse her for a boy (given how her brother is). Another member of the itty-bitty-titty-committee
A teenager who'd like to put as much attention on her appearance as her homo brother, Amatsurahashi Kanata. ayyyyyy
Personnel files.
Access only by security personnel with a C3 clearance.【Full Name】
Amatsurahashi Kanata
【Alias】
Little Sister
【Affiliation】
Undecided *cough*
【Age】
16
【Sex】
Female
【Sexuality】
Straight
【Birthplace】
Kirigakure
【Bloodline】
Amatsurahashi Say it out loud five times, really fast
【Rank】
Chūnin
Psych. report.
Medical secrecy applies.【Personality】
Unlike her brother who has 'shit for brains', Kanata is a lot more normal than her egocentric and metrosexual brother, if a lot more tomboyish than your regular kunoichi. But let's be honest here, what screams femininity more than a girl in a tight suit jumping around and throwing sharp things at others? Her brother.
Foul-mouthed by nature, full of hormones thanks to her age and Kanata's short fuse make her an adorable pack of emotions, insults, bad words and sarcasm all in one.
She's known for not holding anything back, and this has gotten her in a lot more of problems than she's ever wanted to have. Her tongue moves faster than her brain can catch up, hurling insults at people she shouldn't piss off. She depends a lot on her brother Mikoto to get her out of such situations. Sounds dangerous.
An idiot by birth not by choice, Kanata has found herself in more than one tight spot both in school and in the streets. She often comments on how life wouldn't be as exciting if she didn't get in as much problems as she does, though.
Add to all of this the fact that she has several complexes about her body and life and it just makes her the perfect adolescent with attitude problems. She just needs to run away and the pack should be complete.
Among her several complexes, she's got a complex about her chest and an inferiority complex towards her brother. Don't try to mention her height or call her a boy either. k
Overall, Kanata is a short-tempered idiot with a big mouth AND some ability as a ninja. At least she knows how to fight AND when she should just run for it instead of fighting.
"Live to fight another day. Those idiots will never catch me anyway, not with mighty homo Mikoto watching my back." I sense family problems
【History】
Unlike her brother, Kanata was largely ignored in her school years, all the way from elementary school it was just a big whole of... nothing. Have you ever seen your graduation photo and noticed a guy that is there but you never actually saw? If not, that's what several people thought after getting their graduation photo and finally noticing Kanata.
Everyone expected big things from Amatsurahashi this name just keeps popping up and its starting to freak me out Mikoto's sister, only to be let down by the extremely pragmatic and sarcastic Kanata.
Her existence mostly went unnoticed until she finally became a Chuunin. Pairing up with her brother and going out in missions made them a deadly combo.
Finally, people started noticing Kanata and she wasn't sure of whether this was a good or bad thing. Well, she never really did have a lack of friends, she just was in that small group that mostly went unnoticed by others.
Later she determined that it was bad. Real bad. They all came to her with words like 'Oh, did Mikoto have a sister? Never knew.' or 'Wow, to think you could actually do something!'. What came after those comments was most definitely not pretty.
Having gained a bad reputation this time around, people started to actually avoid her. Well, her fame was short lived, and it was good that it was. ... so tragic?
【Family ties】
Kanata's father died before she was born, so she only has her older brother and mother to rely on.
While she is fond of and loves the two of them, she does find them, Mikoto specially, annoying.
Amatsurahashi Haruka | Mother | 42, Kirigakure, Retired Shinobi
Amatsurahashi Mikoto | Brother | 20, Kirigakure, Shinobi, Part of the Red Sages, "Full time homo"
【Dreams and fears】
She dreams of one day surpassing her ever so perfect and beautiful brother, or at the very least shake off the feeling of inferiority she feels towards him. punching up is fun
Her biggest fear is not being able to go to the next One Direction concert living in the shadow of her brother. RIP Also to be noted, she is scared witless of Mikoto's imminent death if he keeps doing dangerous things.
Combat reports.
Gathered from evaluation reports after missions.【Fighting style】
Never to shine herself but to give others the opportunity to shine, Kanata's fighting style is a purely supportive one. She can indeed defend herself in hand to hand combat, yes, but her true talent comes out when she is fighting alongside someone else.
Her specialty are ninjutsu and genjutsu used to support a more aggressive battle style like her brother's. She intends to stall, hinder and trip her opponents at every step they give. Even if they are about to hit their mark, she'll make sure that what they hit is nothing more but an illusion she's made. Cunning and brains, not muscles and... more muscles, are what make her a formidable fighter.
She uses water release, but unlike her brother, she uses mist and barriers to hinder her opponents.
Her taijutsu is the weakest part of her fighting style as a whole. She can easily be overpowered by any opponent with more experience in hand to hand combat or otherwise.
Her taijutsu is focused on the use of her legs, since her arms are more like sticks. Her legs, though, do pack quite a punch for someone her height. She uses a combination of muay thai and tae kwon do to keep opponents at bay while she uses her hands to prepare her next jutsu. Kanata also tends to use submission holds against opponents bigger than her, in order to keep them from moving and to give herself more time to cast her next jutsu. So her taijutsu is shit, but her kicks aren't? Slightly contradictory, probably just me on this one.
Thanks to her being bad at taijutsu, she carries even more kunais than the average shinobi.
【Kekkei genkai, or bloodline limit】
Thank God I don't need to fill this longass form ikr?
【Ninja techniques】
A rank techniques:
Water Release: Water Heavens Convergence oooohhhhh
B rank techniques:
Water Release: Water Formation Pillar
Water Release: Water Beast
Illysionary Mist (not sure about this one. Will leave it at GM's discretion) I accept it.
C rank techniques:
Water Prison Technique
Water Release: Water Gun
Water Clone Technique
Water Release: Enveloping Mist
D-E rank techniques:
Hidden In Mist Technique
【Custom made techniques】
Jutsu name:
Water Release: Enveloping Mist
Rank:
C
Range:
Large, it covers an area of 30 meters around the user.
Description:
The user, Kanata, releases mist from the tip of her fingers that envelops a wide are around her. It does nothing more, nothing less. Once the mist is out of Kanata, it does not take any chakra for her to mantain it. thrifty
I don't really have any issues with this character. Seems fun, doesn't seem broken. Her ninjutsu game is pretty strong for someone who isn't a heavy hitter but not so much as to be unacceptable. It also mentions she uses lots of kunai but you omitted the weapons section. A small thing, but I'd like it if you fixed that.
All in all I give her a pass. Just be sure to address the small things before I go full on anal retentive about it.