I still need a soundboard. Expect a PM heading your way. (You are a life saver!)

[quote=@Koda]Right? I like to continuously improve my writing, so any feedback is major help. Seriously![/quote]
So far there's nothing wrong, but I'll holler if you will. :D

Yeah, Ally's a little... strange. If there were chains she might be half tempted to chain herself to a Thunderjaw. :lol