Review is in [color=cyan]blue[/color]. [quote=@Hillan] [hider= Bitches ain't shit.] [center][img]http://img04.deviantart.net/da2d/i/2013/052/5/a/come_at_me_bro__by_ichan_desu-d5vrhzt.png[/img] [i]“It's easy being me!”[/i] [color=cyan]I don't doubt it[/color] Aro stands at 162 CM, his build is slender, like most boys his age. He's taller than most of his peers, being almost as tall as most adults [color=cyan]not at 162 he ain't[/color]. His eyes are blue, with a red nasty scar running down his right eye - the scar caused by him falling off the swings, right into kunai lying in the sand, only a couple of inches from poking his eye out. Besides that, he has a tattoo on his left shoulder, running down over his chest - a pinup of a female shinobi [color=cyan]b&[/color]. Aro always dresses in a casual looking suit, much to the dismay of his seniors - chinos, dress shirt, tie and sports jacket. All in black, except for the shirt and the tie, which are white and red, respectively. His red hair is usually braided or in a ponytail, keeping the front unkept. [/center] [hr] [u][b]Personnel files.[/b][/u] [indent]【[U]Full Name[/U]】 [I]Aroshima Uzumaki / Sarutobi.[/I] [color=cyan]So his father was a bitch[/color] 【[U]Alias[/U]】 [i]Aro - The Stormchaser[/i] 【[U]Affiliation[/U]】 [i] Undecided but soon to be Crimson Scholars. ( Red Sages.)[/i] [color=cyan]He is or he isn't[/color] 【[U]Age[/U]】 [i]18[/i] 【[U]Sex[/U]】 [i]Male[/i] 【[U]Sexuality[/U]】 [i]Yes.[/i] [color=cyan]no[/color] 【[U]Birthplace[/U]】 [i]Konoha[/i] 【[U]Bloodline[/U]】 [i]Uzumaki[/i] 【[U]Rank[/U]】 [i]Chunnin[/i][/indent] [hr] [u][b]Psych. report.[/b][/u] [indent]【[U]Personality[/U]】 [i]Aro is a little egocentric, he's not uncaring, or easily excitable, but he is self-assured. He speaks his mind, saying exactly what he means and never beating his chest. He knows his strengths and his weaknesses, proudly proclaiming his positive traits, and doing his best to hide his weaknesses. He is truly something of a believer - as most of his clansmen tend to be, his head sometimes in the clouds, instead of on the task ahead of him. However, his natural slacker tendencies have been all but eradicated thanks to the disciplined upbringing of the Sarutobi Household, making him a excellent soldier, and a free thinker. He might be a jack of all trades - or he might be the best of both worlds. [/i][color=cyan]or he's an insubordinate bitchboy, time will tell[/color] 【[U]History[/U]】 [i]He was born in Konoha, his parents both shinobi at the time - his father a jounin and his mother a [color=cyan]"[/color]special[color=cyan]"[/color] chunnin. He grew up in a tough household, being expected to keep up the standards of his fellow Sarutobi, despite showing none of their natural prowess for the ninjutsu arts. In the academy, he was popular due to being social and a easily approachable guy. He wasn't too loud, he wasn't too quiet - he was always ' right on the curve'. He was mediocre, truly. He graduated at 12, and was put in a team with two other kids, just like everyone else. He grew a lot during this time, able to graduate into chunnin at the age of 16, now showing true prowess, proving himself as a fighter and shinobi, using his wits instead of his chakra to overcome challenges. He made headway during the third part of the chunnin exam, where he made his opponent surrender without throwing a single punch, but instead simply talked to him, using his charisma to convince his opponent that maybe his purpose in life wasn't to be a chunnin - maybe he wanted to be something else. [color=cyan]This isn't Undertale. You're gonna have a bad time.[/color] His opponent went on to be a baker. [color=cyan]But is he a good baker?[/color] Aro's always been fascinated with the power of nature - of storms, in particular, and therefor has made a name for himself as The Stormchaser - always on a adventure to find a storm, and tailoring his techniques after said storms. [color=cyan]outta left field, but a'ight[/color][/i] 【[U]Family ties[/U]】 [i]His mother was a proud member of the Uzumaki clan, strong, passionate and incredibly caring, his father a warrior of the Sarutobi clan, concerned with the fate of the world. They were joined thanks to their love for poetry, and found their love in the craft. He grew up in the Sarutobi clan grounds, being trained like one of the clan famous for their tendency to breed prodigies. His childhood was hard - but not too hard. His mother is currently very sick with a form of cancer, and his father is a retired shinobi, unable to continue his work because of many battle earned injuries. [color=cyan]riperino[/color] [/i] [b]Sahashi Sarutobi | Father | 49, Konoha, Former-Shinobi, current teacher at the academy and creator of the 'Scarlet Robin' Poem. [/b] [b]Nami Uzumaki | Mother | 41, Konoha, None. and currently in the hospital under intensive care.[/b] 【[U]Dreams and fears[/U]】 [i]Aro is a dreamer, that is true. But what are his dreams, truly? Well, at first sight, it strikes me like the only things he cares about are steak dinner and female civilians to flirt with. But over a few sessions, it's clear that he has a deeper purpose. He cares, he really does care. About who, and for what purpose? It's impossible to really tell, it's a question best left for time to answer. [color=cyan]So he doesn't afraid of anything? Put something here.[/color][/i][/indent] [hr] [u][b]Combat reports.[/b][/u] [indent]【[U]Fighting style[/U]】 [i]The short and curly is that Aro is a brawler. He'll use his knuckle dusters and get into his opponents face. Relying on momentum-based strikes and his natural agility to defeat his opponent with his taijutsu. However, despite this, he is no fool and has on many times proven to be a thinker, using his natural affinity for seal-based techniques, mix with his elemental jutsu to defeat foes objectively more powerful than him. [color=cyan]read: objectively less intelligent[/color][/i] 【[U]Kekkei genkai, or bloodline limit[/U]】 [b][u]Bloodline limit name:[/u][/b] None. Diddly squat. [color=cyan]Then just delete this section. It's an eyesore if there's no information here.[/color] 【[U]Ninja techniques[/U]】 [u]B rank techniques:[/u] [i][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Great_Dragon_Fire_Technique]Great Dragon Fire Technique[/url][/i] [i][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Flying_Swallow]Lightning Release: Flying Swallow[/url][/i] [color=cyan]k, Asuma[/color] [i][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Ash_Pile_Burning]Ash Pile Burning[/url][/i] [u]C rank techniques:[/u] [i][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release%3A_Great_Fireball_Technique]Great Fireball[/url][/i] [u]D-E rank techniques:[/u] [i]All Academy Techniques.[/i] 【[U]Custom made techniques[/U]】 [b][u]Jutsu name:[/u][/b] [i]Lightning Release: Lightning Rider[/i] [b][u]Rank:[/u][/b] [i]A[/i] [b][u]Range:[/u][/b] [i]Effective range - Melee. [/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]Aro channels a lightning bolt through his body, using it to literally ride the lightning into the ground, the energy of the bolt circumventing in his fist, leading to a tremendous amounts of power being channeled through his hand and knuckle duster. While it is primarily a single target attack, it could be used to straight up attack the ground, causing a shockwave able to shatter the ground. A direct hit is often a direct sentence to the hospital - or worse. It soley relies on the concept of hitting someone with the bolt of lightning - a bolt Aro cannot throw. [color=cyan]tbh I have a hard time as seeing this as powerful enough to be A rank. It's basically like a less useful version of Lightning Cutter. I'd rank it as B, considering it isn't even guaranteed to be fatal on hit, unlike Lightning Cutter. Though it does need some kind of drawbacks anyways like build-up time or w/e.[/color][/i] [b][u]Jutsu name:[/u][/b] [i]Sealing Technique: Homing Lightning.[/i] [b][u]Rank:[/u][/b] [i]C[/i] [b][u]Range:[/u][/b] [i] Melee[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]Aro places a seal on a opponent, object or ally which works as a chakra infused lightning rod, leading the electric discharge directly to the target. This technique, just like Lightning Rider, relies on a strong current of electricity being present, something Aro has no means of generating on his own accord. [color=cyan]Why would you put this on an ally?[/color] [/i] [b][u]Jutsu name:[/u][/b] [i]Red Fang Strike[/i] [b][u]Rank:[/u][/b] [i]C[/i] [b][u]Range:[/u][/b] [i]Melee. [/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]A Series of four to six punches executed by Aros trademark kickbox style of brawling, leaning in close before unleashing the combination which is made more deadly with his electric flying sparrow technique. [color=cyan]Wouldn't it be slashes rather than punches, then?[/color][/i] 【[b]Weapons:[/b]】 He carries a set of knuckle dusters. And a pack of cigarettes. Nothing less, nothing more. [color=cyan]ow the edge[/color][/indent] [/hider] [/quote] [color=cyan]Nothing too harsh here. Make a couple tiny fixes and you'll have my acceptance.[/color]