[@Somnium]

A for effort then, don't beat yourself up! I'm not trying to complain and it's good you took the criticism well!
I look forward to building a story with you, and everyone else.

I will say this though, be prepared for your concept of alchemy to be challenged. The story will focus heavily on the ideas of magic and technology and how they are interpreted. I do not want to sit here and dictate a universe to anyone, that's no fun for players, I just want players to be aware, certain things will be molded to and by the plot! :sun