It irritates me when I make a CS skeleton and people don't follow it. There's a reason there's one. [@mattmanganon] No sorry. You have a Plethora of abilities. I can understand making pacts with demons but Traditional magic is extremely vague. I don't want people pulling stuff out of their hats when faced with problems. Also Sigilist magic is essentially a permanent thing. So your scrolls don't need to be reapplied unless the markings are damaged. And as for age control thats a no no. Sigilist can use facades to make themselves appear younger and as a rule most mages live for thousands of years but age catches up to almost everyone, eventually. Looking young is fine even changing your appearance to a degree (A sigilist only has their body to work with when it comes to facades so they can change the look of their face but not really their entire body.). Not Trying to give you the third degree but you have way too much in your characters CS for me to be comfortable to accept it. Tone it down and i'll give it another look. [@AdamantiumWolf] Earth magic being basic Geokinesis i assume? If so then accepted. [@Xhala] You have a clairvoyants ability in your list of abilities. May i suggest just having her as an elementalist to better min max her power set. Water manipulation can be useful when making potions. Instant bunsen burner in your hand with fire. Wind control is already one of your powers. Then earth well you can make yourself some cool statues.