@DJAtomica Well, that was quite a read and I must say a very well crafted CS. I can see you put a lot of thought into this and I appreciate that, I just hope you're willing to work with me because I saw a couple things that are making me a bit apprehensive. Honestly I don't particularly like the idea of shapeshifters that are that adept at shifting because they are such an overpowered race. They could take on the form of any emperor or leader they wanted and run a star system. However as long as you dont abuse it I'm okay with it because I really do love what you've done and I think you have a very interesting and unique character, I'm sure I can trust you with it as I don't feel like you have any intent to abuse it I just wanted to make my feelings on it clear. 

The other issues were all with the equipment. I like the armor and I think its cool and can fit perfectly well into this galaxy, just not with the CCS. That armor is something you would find being tested with the Teret Hierarchy, its too advanced to be mass produced by the CCS. In truth although the CCS is the closest to the inner core of the galaxy the only reason they retain the most power is because they have the strongest races and most powerful militaries. The Hierarchy compensates for their small military by having hyper advanced technology like your armor. If you would be interested in perhaps playing some sort of operative for the hierarchy or a naval officer for them rather than the CCS that would put that issue to rest.

The last thing was the painkiller rounds, they were the only gadget you had that I really wanted removed because all of the other ones make sense and I think are cool and would be fun to see in use. The painkiller rounds just seem a bit overkill and maybe a little cartoony to me. If its not a big deal to you I'd rather they were just eliminated. 

I hope this isn't too much because I really liked your CS you did a very good job and the races history was really cool as well. I would be very interested in returning to your peoples star system in game.