[quote=@Raijinslayer]
[@Kouki] Here you go[/quote]

Good, but it had a few grammatical errors.

Another small thing, you don't need so much detail in action scenes. This is probably pointless cause this was from the past so your style may have changed already but some things are better shown than told. 

Like, you don't need to say what Dust you switch to, you just have say that you switched. We'll get the rest when, in the second after switching, your weapon becomes engulfed in flames or you jump in the air with a gust of wind, context will tell us what dust you're on now.