[quote=@Drifting Pollen] Well, you got him submitted now! :) There's some things I'd like clarifying, however, as well as somethings you need to tone down: - First and foremost, 'Unkillable' is only a way to [i]remove him from battle[/i] (thus forfeiting) so you can use him again in the future, right? This would probably seem obvious, but I once fought someone with a similar ability who literally used it to revive their character mid-battle and keep fighting... so I would like confirmation that this will not be abused in such a manner. - Secondly, the rings. You mentioned they charge before activating, would this work similarly to prepping a spell? Would the charging of the rings be perceptible to an observer in any way? - Thirdly, the ring of Frost 'instantly' freezes anything within its reach. Maybe it's just the wording, but wouldn't this make the attack virtually impossible to avoid? There's no way for a fighter to know how far the cone extends (unless they've seen it before), and if the freezing is instant it would be impossible to get out of... perhaps the cone could expand outwards from the ring, and/or take some time to freeze what falls within the cone. - Lastly, the Titan ability is fine in concept... but 'several hundred sledgehammers at once' is waaaaaaaaaay too much strength. You've already given him enhanced physical abilities with Superhuman King, so I'd recommend either removing Titan entirely or toning it down to something like Shen's Qi enhancement (which adds up to around one sledgehammer of extra force per blow, and costs him stamina at that). Hope this isn't too much trouble... but yeah, would like to get this stuff sorted out before approving. Thank you! [/quote] 1) He can be "killed" yes but the regeneration process is so long he might as well be out of combat. It's the same with the rest of my characters. 2) Yes. Touch, charge, fire. 3) Yes it extends in a cone. Guess I didn't phrase right. It'll freeze just about anything, not instantly but like Diablo style. 4) Sure.