[b]Character Name[/b]: Lance Bleachbarrow [b]Real Name[/b]: Louie Black [b]Real Age[/b]: 17 [b]Appearance[/b]: Lance is a man who stand slightly above average height, he isn't exactly muscular, lean would be a god way to describe him. He has shaggy brown hair to about his earlobes, and it seems to be determinedly messy. He has sharp blue eyes that stick out on his angular face. He has a more pale complexion and he seems to be unable to grow facial hair (oh how he has tried) [b]Class[/b]: Archtype- Ranger , Classname- [b]Spacial gunner[/b] (This class is made for staying back and hitting as many targets at the same time as possible. It is good for aggroing and large groups of more easy to kill enemies, but it might not be so good on more mobile enemies, the class is rather frail and thus needs protection, as well as it needs to rely on loot as well as magic to work together) [b]Job(s)[/b]: [b]Hunter[/b]- Kills mobs for materials that allow for other users to buy and use [b]Gunsmith[/b]- Able to use resources to upgrade or create ranged weaponry [u][b]Skill List[/b][/u]: [b]Divide and conquer[/b]- Places a small one shot pistol like summon (small hovering bot), it will shoot whatever the user next auto attacks (can be destroyed, as stated, has one shot only) [b]Dual wield[/b]- A spectral copy of whatever [b]one handed[/b] ranged weapon the user currently has equipped appears for a short time (Raises with level, long recharge time,uses ammo) [b]Bullet time[/b]- User is rooted in place and fires speedy shots for a short time (uses more ammo, makes the user stop shooting for a short time after use) [b]Passive[/b]- [b]Hunter and gatherer[/b] - Scavenges scarce amounts of ammo from dead enemies they have damaged [b]Equipment List:[/b] Hand me down boot X 2 (each boot is from a different set) Leather armor X 1 Rusty hunting rifle X 1 Hunters monocle X 1 Ammo pouch X 1 Is this too OP? I feel like I gave him too much damage like abilities...I would love some critiquing!