Okay my character will be done tomorrow, I'm just writing bio as of right now. 

[hider=Thomas][b]Name:[/b] Thomas Craven
[b]Blood:[/b] Pure 
[b]Age by appearance:[/b] 25
[b]Immortal age:[/b] 720
[hider=Appearance] [img]http://orig14.deviantart.net/42f1/f/2008/153/d/6/soulless_by_hellstern.jpg[/img][/hider]
[b]House:[/b] Ravnos
[b]Rank:[/b] Prelate
[b]Short bio (+personality):[/b]

Thomas Craven was born a commoner on the land of one of England's lords. By the time he was in his early teens he was a squire for his Lord. With the advent of the third Crusade Thomas left to follow his lord through the duration of the Third Crusade, during the siege of Acre Thomas’ Lord was wounded and Thomas took his place on the battle line. After the siege was successful Thomas earned a Knighthood from King Richard the Lionheart. 

By the end of the Third Crusade and the failure to capture Jerusalem meant that the Church would send another wave of Crusaders. This was to be Thomas’ fate; however destiny intervened and a Syrian vampire fighting on Saladin’s side of the war converted Thomas into one of the Infected. Returning to England for the interim years Thomas began building his holdings and house which came with his rise to Knighthood.  

With the dawn of the Fourth Crusade Thomas once again took to the field of battle on behalf of the British Island.[/hider]

Lemme know if you see any adjustments to be made