[@Noxious]I say that it's about as wordy and well-written as one of Rockette's posts, so I'm satisfied. Like how most of your post are just Dach's thoughts and mannerisms, with only one or two lines of actually dialogue. Dach intriques me, and in game, I'd say that she's one of the people that James finds more than tolerable, because she says only what she needs to say.