[quote=@Raptorman]
And here is the first of them. This map shows the rough borders for the Dominion's protective zone and the actual area controlled by the Dominion directly. The Dominion exercises no direct power over the areas not designated as such but has pledged to defend the inhabitants who actually control the land from outside aggression. 

[hider=First Map][img]http://i.imgur.com/DUVKkMR.png[/img][/hider]
[/quote]

I would say since this RP is about vast deserts and wildernesses, both your actual territory (eg, the entire mountains) and your protectorate zone are a bit much. I would just note where your cities are, since its unlikely you actually control much territory beyond them, esp since your faction is mostly underground.

In short, and this applies not just to you, territorial borders are not very meaningful when most territory is mutant-infested wasteland.