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@Hawlin

You can post already, however if any of them requests you to do any changes you're bound to follow it.


The same will be valid for when they approve a CS and I'm not here at the time, for that matter.

@j8cob

I'll let @TheWindel point the changes you have to do to your CS, since he's much more into the vampire lore than I'm , I'd say it's good choice as far as it goes, but at the very least I can say that that regeneration and shapeshifting don't work well with the vampire lore we are following mainly because they are attributes of a higher class of vampires known as Primordials, of which there are only four individuals "alive".

Other than her powers, the rest is fine by me. As soon as she gets reviewed you can add her to the character tab.
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I'll post my cs when I get home ^-^

Looks like its gonna be good
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I'll go ahead and move mine, then if there are no problems since I've corrected that little error on my part~
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For anyone interested, this is my first Character for this RP: http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/3298518

Anyone who hasn't built a CS yet can feel free to use her as a model.
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Mainly touched up his personality and made Airgetlam into a Treasure, cause it seemed like it fit.

Name: Rui-Ling Kazanari
Title: Spirit Hammer, Gordeau
Gender: Male
Age: Has stopped aging when he was 17, having lived 158 years by now.
Height: 5’5
Weight: 179lbs






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@j8cob

So as stated before, only human characters are allowed in this RP (for the most part). However, I'll make an exception for Lucille. We can discuss her details in a PM.
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Is this still open, by any chance?
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@Ashifili

Everything seems ok, you can post him on the character tab as well.

@CorruptedShadow

I think we can take some more, so you are welcome to join if you so do wish.
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I hope he isn't a mary sue. I like zero to hero characters, so I was hoping to go with one.
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He's 20 years old, but you still describe him as a schoolboy?
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Shhh, he failed classes, he's only there for the sport.

Good thought though, I'm a little too tired at the moment. I'll go fix that.
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Tell me if I need to change anything.
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Yeesh, where did he live? 14 year olds getting death penalties? XD

Guess crazier things have happened though.
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Here is my CS. If their is anything wrong with it or if there are any suggestions, I am very open to change. If more information is wanted, I can add more as well. Thanks.
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Huh, lotsa double ups, huh?

Double vampires, double lightning kiddos, and now double soul-stealing treasures...
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Yeah, that's true, although mine is harder to capture the soul with, and I had been thinking of the soul stealing mirror since I saw this.
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Gonna stop here. Feel free to comment any/all critiques/changes that need to be done. I feel like I was a bit slow getting this out, so things have probably changed xD Also my first CS on this site. >.> ...

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... <.< probably needs more under the personality. I feel like I messed up there.
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You know, I think I might have missed the memo somewhere, but I do have to ask...

What's a Treasure?
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You know, I think I might have missed the memo somewhere, but I do have to ask...

What's a Treasure?


The first post explains it, but their basically magicish items. It sounded like their were a lot of ways you could play them.
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