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[@NuttsnBolts] I changed it, let me know what you think
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Looks like you've been accepted :)

Several GMs here will look at style and design as well, so when you post it in the character tab, go through and edit some design into it to see if you can play around with the look and uniqueness.

Id say take a look at mine (cause it seems everyone is copying it. Lol) but notice how there is some colour, a pic, and it just looks nicer than solid text.

Thats up to you though, but you can do this as a bit of a fun project.