[@Gun] So I've been tasked to look up your sheet. 

I don't see any Universe or series of origin and I looked up the name. So I'm assuming he/she/whatever tumblr desires is an OC. 

In that case, you do need a Personality and Biography. Unless I'm missing it in the pile of fluff. In that case please do direct me to the correct lines. 

Now because of my current state I cannot make a clear judgement on such a large sheet. However I did read multiple parts and I do have to say that as much as the technical details are fine and dandy, the quantity of fluff is generally overwhelming. It does make some parts clear while others are drowned out by details that are, quite frankly, of zero relevance to this type of RP. I commend the effort put into it however.

If you want Lmpkio to give you the green light faster, I recommend just saying what each weapon/ability does exactly. Like the effects. It'll be easier for him to determine if the character is ridiculously gamey or not. (Meaning designed to just gather easy wins, because having a gargantuan power section is very red flag-ish)

In any case I'll give it an analysis no matter what's done. It'll just take longer.