I seem to have forgotten to say my name could be displayed yet again XD

[@RyuHll] thank you for your review of the alchemist. Commonly confused words seem to be a recurring problem for me. They sound the same and I pick the wrong one, probably because in many cases I don't know the difference or that it is one of those commonly confused words. I did read through my entry several time and let the MS Word spellchecker run, which didn't pick up on any mistakes. Could you, if you want to, point my mistakes out? I have a hard time picking them out myself, especially when a story is fresh in my mind. 

I looked up the difference between divers and diverse and now know why it should have been diverse, but to complicate this example even more, divers is a proper Dutch word as well meaning diverse in English. 
This story is going to be a part of a bigger story and I hope eiter a RPGC or another labour will allow me to work on it. so far RPGC3, labour 3,4 and 5 were all written in the same universe and I like where this is going.


[@PlatinumSkink]Thank you for your review. I already have ideas for the second part of the alchemist, but for the labour they weren't needed and I didn't have the time to add them to his story.