[quote=@ClocktowerEchos]
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Whoops, sorry about that >.<"

As for the scene where Jack's brother died, the second shot was originally from a police officer shooting at one of the kidnappers but then I decided to do some editing and somethings might have got derpy. Same with the grammatical stuff.
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No problem.  The sample post is kind of our fault because we did not realize that it was missing from the OP (although it is mentioned in the copy-ready template in the hider).

[quote=@ClocktowerEchos]
EDIT: Can I ask what NMS is? o.o
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NMS = [b]N[/b]ite[b]m[/b]are [b]S[/b]hape