[quote=@Garden Gnome] [@HushedWhispers] Just wondering on two things regard the Family of Ostwall. 1. From what I've read, the patriarch of is a ruthless warrior. Would it be fair to assume that the rest of the family is or has knowledge of combat/fighting as well? 2. How old is the princess be, or would that be up to the writer? I was hoping to go for an older teenager/ young adult age of maybe 18-20 or so. [@Nevix] I just glanced over, and thought maybe I can help. For starters, you can remove the fullstop from the [.hr] I also noticed that you have a couple of codes that are not closed or are in excess in the personality section that is also contributing to the formatting break. [/quote] Hm, they could. Everything is entirely up to you when it comes to making your character even their age. I am not one that says your character has to be like this or that but I will say that it is not natural for a Queen or Princess to fight and get their hands dirty. LOL.[hr][h3][b]Update;[/b] To everyone that has turned in a character, give me a moment to review over them and such, please. Thanks.[/h3]