[quote=@Rune_Alchemist]
[b]Seems like you only edited the parts after the auto-hitting to me...which I already stated, wouldn't even happen. Graf also agreed that he believed Sorcha would be able dodge the little temporal field.[/b]

but, ehum, for the sake of not causing another ruckus...[@GrafRoy Zeppeli]?
[/quote]

This right here. 

The auto-hitting is still there. 

I recommend changing it to, 

[i]would lock itself around three places in the dragon-kin's body[/i]

to make it seem less like auto-hitting and more like an actual RP fight. 

Let's think about it like this. 

Sorcha [i][b]might[/b][/i] have dodged the moment she heard the spell being chanted. Perhaps she didn't. You are describing the effect the spell [b]WOULD[/b] have on Sorcha once casted, but it is up to Sorcha's writer AKA Rune, whether it will actually hit or not.