[quote=@GrafRoy Zeppeli] He's added the bits and pieces that make it seem more like an attack that would happen instead of something that has already happened. At least for me, I think there are no more problems with auto-hitting. [/quote] Oh...I hadn't noticed? I didn't notice a major change in the wording/what is written. He's describing actions he's doing to Sorcha after he attempts to time-freeze her. Which he shouldn't be doing. She'd be a mile in the air almost after he cast his little spell - or at least far enough away to where she'd be safe from further assault, before probably realizing she might be in a bit of trouble, and dashing away somewhere. At least, that's what I was thinking, anyways. But if both of you think this is fine, I can work with it. But Edgars going to get a bit of a shock from being so close to her.