@Noble: You, sir, have incredible patience to have gone through Shadow Dragon more than once. XD The game pales in comparison to its brethren, IMHO.

Yeah, I don't think using an image of Forde is a good idea. Not only is he from the FE universe, but he's from [i]The Sacred Stones[/i], which is what this is a sequel to. If you can't find another good image for him, I'll live with it, but if possible, please do change it. c:

And why are you halfway to a C-Rank when you're Level 1 with 0 EXP? Then maybe if you were to change the age of 15 to the age of 16 when you're talking about when he became a soldier (unless you were to say he became an apprentice or squire or something at 15, which would work, too), then I think that's everything. Except the fact that Kangutso might be upset that you filled a flier role before he did (as his intent was to be a male Skywatcher, I think, unless he decided not to be involved). I'll let the two of you work that out between yourselves.

@All: I'll be referencing the royal symbol of Renais in my first IC post when I start it up. In case no one knows what that looks like or no one has caught that detail, look at the official artwork for [url=http://serenesforest.net/media/fe8illust/L_Fado.png]Fado[/url], [url=http://serenesforest.net/media/fe8illust/L_Seth.jpg]Seth[/url], [url=http://serenesforest.net/media/fe8illust/ephraim.png]Ephraim[/url], and [url=http://serenesforest.net/media/fe8illust/eilik.png]Eirika[/url]. The symbol is only half-shown on Fado, but on all the others, it is shown on the upper portion of their armor (Seth's breastplate, and the plate just beneath the breastplate on Ephraim and Eirika).