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Ohh, I thought we had to use one of the suggested weaknesses, I might rework him and just add my own weaknesses then.
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Excellent.

I've got a reference idea for him already. A Hot-headed spellsword who's probably a part of one of the military branches of either Oro or Tyro, although it's more of a formality since he's of royal descent it's a fake position to appease the familial ties he has.



Little armor because of Oro Stone skin and Tyro hot environment.
Although the weapon is an oversized claymore that he swings around usually after imbuing it with a swathe of flames.
He must also be a terrible ladies man, for comedic effect.
Somewhere between "Spoiled brat" and "actually surprisingly capable fighter."


His gun powder thing is fine. He seems fine so far. I like it so far. We are waiting for the 2 or more to create thier profile.
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Okay, so I need to make a history which I can do if I know a bit about the Fotian military, and Hanoxx/Niscent family history.

Also need to add an Unknown weakness, any suggestions?

I reason the following:

Crown Prince Magnix Hanoxx's Father, King Hanoxx, has a younger sister who was married into the Niscent family in an attempt to strengthen relations between the two kingdoms. The Queen Allo Niscent's younger brother had this honor. Their Child is Eden, who would be the current King Hanoxx's first cousin, and Queen Niscent's nephew. Does this sound reasonable?



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I think it's finished. If their are no problems with it, then here it is, but if there are then changes can very easily be made, just tell me. Thanks.
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@rechonq
Excellent profile. Add it to the IC please.
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I might work on another character as well. I really look forward to this RP.
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@Rai

So any particular suggestions for hidden weaknesses?
Also, is the proposed linage okay?
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@Rai
Can humans have existed in this world and start the same way as the descended, or are they new to the world?
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@Rai Sorry to bug ya, I need help with unknown weaknesses as well.

EDIT: I unintentionally tend to make op powers so just let me know if I am getting carried away. ><'
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@rechonqNew. All the prior humans I've got ideas for.

@Temperance Change the dead stars thing to something more like captured dead star essence or something. Dead stars are massive.

@The Grey Dust Its ok. You could add that since he is related to both royal blood lines he has a arrogant sense of ability. The other two hindrances you could make up on your own. Remember all weaknesses listed are automatic. They stack under your bloodline, the ones you list are unique to your character.
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@Rai

Almost done with the write up. Should I give Eden a dragon assistant which tries to keep him in line?
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@The Grey DustSomething small but intelligent.
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@The Grey Dust Awe! -squee- Eve is so adorable!
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@Temperance
Thanks, I tried to make them quite a pair.

Hopefully I can balance on both characters I have well.

There's the quite possibly mad dark budding dark wizard. and the devil-may-care royal adventurer.

I might do a third who shall be the holier-than-thou serious religious fanatic/assassin
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I like it. *Stamps approval*@The Grey Dust

@TemperanceYour formatting looks so nice.
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@Rai Thanks much! Feel free to use if you want. ^^ I am glad we're able to use code in the guild.

I am aiming for my character to be finished by tomorrow. I'll have WiFi then so researching spells will be easier.

& could Shapphira acquire a pet sometime during the rp? I don't want to make one now but think it would be fun later to come across one.

Very excited to start this story with everyone.
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