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Those pirates are almost as hardcore as my Boy Scout troop. Almost.

Everything looks pretty dandy, and as I mentioned over PM, the hidden bits of his bio are all a-okay to go. The character works on all levels, although I do have to ask if he went through some form of therapy and remediation after escaping the pirates because being forced into murdering your friends for the formative years of your life tends to leave a mark/ potentially fucks a kid up. I’d just like some form of acknowledgement that Vellios was acclimatized back into turian society and cleared with the doctors in the period between his rescue and conscription. While it’s true all turians serve the public in their conscription phase, not all of it is strictly military service, so they’d definitely want to make sure their recruits were all of a sound mind before enlisting.
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That was actually assumed that when they found at about what, 15-16, he was interrogated then evaluated and finally put through therapy and such while in the orphanage. It also likely continued through his conscription (see Syberus keep a slight military order with the belief the strong survive while the weak die so Vellios is most comfortable with that scene. He can follow orders easily and with a person he likely learned to trusted, he is fully able.), but as you can see, not all his issues were fully solved since he's a bit of an addict and heavy alcohol drinker. I think I only gave a year or more between it but I don't want to extend it too much, else he is less likely to be on the 314 Relay Incident front.

@Rtron@Fallenreaper Dex does get a say in who she wants to sleep with right????

Just don't forget she's got a nasty left hook that is a little electrifying. ;)


She does, he's a gentlemen though he will flirt and tease some. Even spoil her a bit.

@DearTrickster Serena certainly isn't gonna be attempting to sleep with her, and I'm sure Vellios is classy....


Lol, indeed.
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@Dervish Awesome, I'll make a few changes to her backstory, maybe change it to where he had been kidnapping many Asari? That seems like something they'd want to stop if it was more their own people than the other races.

EDIT: Added in a few changes, made Lisal a few years older than Valiss, also had it where Kurd had been known to send his agents into Asari worlds to kidnap some of their people into slavery. Figured that'd make him a top target.

Thank you for the acceptance, can't wait to get this show on the road!
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Edited and improved. Omni-Shield ability added.
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@Dervish Changes made: changed his class from Sentinel to Soldier, seeing as how I still don't want him to be an infiltrator for story reasons.

Gave him new powers. Added the Mattock rifle into his arsenal.

Removed all mention of biotics. I think he's better off without 'em.
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@Dervish Alright, made the changes you wanted such as removing the Submission Net power like you recommended and added the name if Khosin's friend within the Blue Suns and how they met. I also changed the thing with the tattoo so that it was mostly erased but that it was done in a rush job and so that those who know the symbol and can get a good luck at it can figure out what it is, hope that's ok
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Groovy! I'll be going over the changes in a couple hours when the hospital makes it impossible to sleep. You guys are good sports.

I also figured I should mention I am up for taking on another co-GM if anyone is feeling plucky, creative, or just want to try wearing the pants for a while. The more brains I have working on plot ideas and keeping our veritable herd contented, the better! I also like having people to bounce ideas off. So if anyone who's been accepted into my loving sensual embrace wants in on that action, lemme know.

Also I discovered the fridge where they keep the juice is literally across the hallway. PREPARE TO BE BOARDED!
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Dervish has found the juice hoard.

We are all doomed.
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I could become that co-GM, since I am replaying the game (currently on two).

But, if anyone else wants to take over, go ahead.
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Are you accepting new applicants?
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Nope, I have harvested the required amount of souls to make my Satanic stir fry. Check back later!
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@Dervish ok fair enough, let me know if you need more meat for the grinder
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@Thundercrash Hellis never sent me anything about your sheet, so I'm going to assume he ran off to join a herd of elk to find himself or something. Tia's good in my books, so off to the roster with ye!

@Rtron Changes all check out! Get yer ass on the bus.

@DJAtomika The sheet works out much better without the biotic considerations. I also got and reviewed your PM stuff, and that all sounds good to me. I'll be responding to that in a little while, but I think you're good to go!

@Mortarion Everything pretty much looks good in my books, although there's one detail in the private message we'll have to axe that's pretty minor. Outside of that, everything looks dandy, so welcome to the club.

A note for everyone: Please try to find the exact colour code for your font colour. It makes it easier to find out what it is when trying to do formatting and stuff.
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@Dervish Alright then, added Khosin to the roster. Can't wait for this to start :D
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Added Alex to the roster. I'm so excited :)
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@Thundercrash Hellis never sent me anything about your sheet, so I'm going to assume he ran off to join a herd of elk to find himself or something. Tia's good in my books, so off to the roster with ye!

@Rtron Changes all check out! Get yer ass on the bus.

@DJAtomika The sheet works out much better without the biotic considerations. I also got and reviewed your PM stuff, and that all sounds good to me. I'll be responding to that in a little while, but I think you're good to go!

@Mortarion Everything pretty much looks good in my books, although there's one detail in the private message we'll have to axe that's pretty minor. Outside of that, everything looks dandy, so welcome to the club.

A note for everyone: Please try to find the exact colour code for your font colour. It makes it easier to find out what it is when trying to do formatting and stuff.


Ummm, Dervish, the code I use is literally the word that's put into the CS.
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Ummm, Dervish, the code I use is literally the word that's put into the CS.


It was a general statement for everyone.
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It was a general statement for everyone.


You stated everyone else! I'm part of that, am I not?
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You stated everyone else! I'm part of that, am I not?


Apparently "Note for everyone" isn't generic enough. I will fight you.
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Apparently "Note for everyone" isn't generic enough. I will fight you.


Hehee, promise? *huggles*
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Hehee, promise? *huggles*


Already lacing up my gloves! Meet you at the flag pole, nerd.
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